I’ve been taking a break from writing my book to have some thinking time. There was something missing from the main character. I’m happy with the main story but a lot of the subsidiary characters were better formed than the main one, Tybalt but now I think I have solved it with a new sub plot which gives him more depth. So far I have re-written the first two chapters which I’m a lot happier with, I might Post the first one on here some time. Anyway chapter three awaits.