You might recall last week I said I was going to change a character from and evil child beating sadistic teacher that kills a boy to a friendly charming likable teacher who kills a boy. When I wrote the original one he just came over as a pantomime villain. I think I subconsciously tried to write a Snape. He only has a minor part but still I’m hoping he will feel believable. I also think a nice person who kills or deliberately causes a death has more impact than a sadistic git. Still not actually re-written him yet so still might come over as wooden, will have to wait and see.